Today's Haiku

topic posted Thu, March 8, 2007 - 10:15 PM by  Dave
Shudder and shimmy
Blown tire on the highway man
Glad to be alive

The dogs just freaked out
Am I in danger again?
Oh, just a squirrel
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Dave
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    Re: Today's Haiku

    Fri, March 9, 2007 - 1:23 AM
    Don't be hidin' th' squoyurlll!!
    I think one of my back tires was doing the same thing...
    Tell those dogs to get out an' put on the spare...
    Very evocative, spare, pragmatic poetry
    Belieing the danger in the moment,
    with verve... and aplomb...
    Next time, just crush that squirrel...
    Then he's just a bloody paper weight,
    and can't hide...

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